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A Home that was once lively
Is now an empty shell
Void of the joy it once held
Filled with the despair of loss

A Mother sitting anxiously waiting
For her children to return to their abandoned home
Sitting in the empty House once full of life
But now empty of the liveliness it once held

Tears cascade down a face twisted in agony
Rain falls down panes of glass on the empty House
Like the tears that fall down the agonized face, but in despair
For the children lost and not yet found.

Days turn to weeks, weeks to months and months to years
Eternity passes and slowly the first child is found
Returned to her Mothers loving arms
Weeping and begging for forgiveness

The Mother smiles and forgives her child
And asks her to come inside back in her Home
Her child enters and slowly she helps bring back
Her other lost Brothers and Sisters.

After many years of endless searching
All the Brothers and Sisters are found
And now Mother can rest peacefully without worry
Rest without agony and despair.

The once empty shell
Void of the joy it had once held
Is now once again a Home
Full of life and joy.


Jezykia Darke
15.4.10
I wrote this in my Psychology class the other day partly cuz I was bored, but mostly because I wanted to write something.


For the
#Live-Love-Write prompt coming home.

I tried for a more short sweet and to the point poem which I haven't really done. So enjoy and please leave critique if there is something that can be fixed or just whatever.

Thank you.

Poem c me.

Pic if it shows from a Google search and of the owner of the pic I use.
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Thedarkdestroyer Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
nice poem, it tells a story. ^^ i once did psychology very intresting subject just didnt do well in the tests
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Nakalishy Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2010  Student Writer
Thank you I am glad that you were able to tell about the story within it. And yea I thought it was too, but I really can't do tests well at all. For some reason I can do projects and papers just not tests.
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Thedarkdestroyer Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
^^ im gld im not the one one who cant do tests.
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Nakalishy Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2010  Student Writer
Yea me too for some reason I just don't which makes me hate them all the more. :)
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Thedarkdestroyer Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
^^ yep i just wish they could asses you on your class work unstead
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Nakalishy Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2010  Student Writer
Yea definitely it would be nice if they did so. I would actually manage to keep all A's or B's. :)
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Thedarkdestroyer Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
^^ would be nice
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Nakalishy Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2010  Student Writer
Mhm truly then there wouldn't be as much stress and such either as well. It would be truly great. :D
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